Kia ora Tracey I really find your writing very interesting and like how you did it as an acrostic poem, next time can you explain why you did it and why you use identity as your word- Capri
Kia Ora Tracey, My name is Caitlin and I am a year 7 student at Belfast School. I really like your acrostic poem about Identity. This reminded me of a time when I did an acrostic poem. Maybe next time you could do a bit more of a description. Kind Regards Caitlin
Kia Ora Tracey My name is Olivia and I am from Belfast School, I really like how in your title you tell us what term its is, what week, what day and also what subject. Keep it up! Did you think about adding a title into your actual piece of writing. Next time you could maybe add more detail, other than that it's great.
Hi Tracey my name is Olivia from Ahipara school. I really like your writing but I would like to know why you chose identity as your word and what inspired you to use this word? Other than that this writing is great.
Kia ora Tracey I really find your writing very interesting and like how you did it as an acrostic poem, next time can you explain why you did it and why you use identity as your word- Capri
ReplyDeleteHi, nice acrostic poem. It has a good message in it. Maybe next time you could say why you chose to write about it. Good work!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Tracey,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Caitlin and I am a year 7 student at Belfast School.
I really like your acrostic poem about Identity.
This reminded me of a time when I did an acrostic poem.
Maybe next time you could do a bit more of a description.
Kind Regards
Caitlin
Kia Ora Tracey My name is Olivia and I am from Belfast School,
ReplyDeleteI really like how in your title you tell us what term its is, what week, what day and also what subject.
Keep it up!
Did you think about adding a title into your actual piece of writing.
Next time you could maybe add more detail, other than that it's great.
Hi Tracey my name is Olivia from Ahipara school. I really like your writing but I would like to know why you chose identity as your word and what inspired you to use this word? Other than that this writing is great.
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